HaydenJ

===My Table of Contents includes my work as a writer this year. You will notice several drafts of many of my pieces. As you read my final copies, I ask that you notice my efforts to convey a clear organised message, vivid images with precise word choice, and correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling designed to effectively share my ideas with you, my readers!===

HaydenJ-Estes Park PROLOGUE In this draft I would like my reader to look for the specific feeling I want my reader to experience while reading. In this draft I have put in as an effort to put a mood in my writing, I would like my reader to notice my vivid images I painted with words.

HaydenJ-Bio poem In this piece of writing of mine I would like the reader to imagine my personality that I have described with interesting, eye-poppng words to exemplify characteristics of mine.

HaydenJ-Where I'm From In my writing draft I describe my experiences as a child and what I like/liked to do. In this piece I would appreciate you looking for the consistent language I am trying to speak to improve my writing techniques.

HaydenJ-Chapter 15 (What Came Down the Chimney) This is a writing piece I have committed to writing for school purposes and is for a grade. You can read my summary of __Freak the Mighty__. I think that my reader would enjoy this paper, but still I would like you to search for my correct grammer and usage, punctuation and tell me if I could add creative word choice, so vivid images can appear to you as you are reading.

HaydenJ-Snapshot Moment My writing in this piece is okay, I rate. I would like my reader to read to see if you experience a mood that may overwhelm my writing, if so can you comment how I should change that and if my ending is very abrupt and has no impact at all on the reader.

HaydenJ-Perception I feel the title Perception does not tell my reader what my poem is about. I would like for you to comment if my conclusion is memorable and that my start is. . .lame?

HaydenJ-Snapshot Moment II In this writing piece I would like my reader to notice my descriptive word choice and vivid imagery that is precise, comment if I can make changes to improve my writing.