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My TABLE OF CONTENTS includes my work as a writer this year. You will notice __several drafts__ of many of my pieces. As you read my final copies, I ask that you notice my efforts to convey a clear, organized message, vivid images with precise word choice, and correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling designed to effectively share my ideas with you, my readers!
 * **a brief description of what you think you did well in the writing.**
 * **the word** **praise, raise, or elevate** **depending on what feedback you want from your audience.**

JacobS-Biopoem I want you to comment on how well you think I described my personal inventory.

JacobS-Where I'm From I want you to tell me if I should make some changes, why or why not.

JacobS-Snapshot Moment Comment on what you thought was good, and comment on what could of been better.

JacobS-Perception Poem Comment if you understand it or if you have trouble visualizing the scene.

JacobS-Estes Park Prologue I want you to comment and tell me if I should swap anything out with something better or more descriptive.

JacobS-Snapshot Moment 2 Do you want me to do something different, keep it the same, or otherwise comment on something else you had in mind that could be helpful.