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Jill's Jammin' Journal Jots

My TABLE OF CONTENTS includes my work as a writer this year. You will notice __several drafts__ of many of my pieces. As you read my final copies, I ask that you notice my efforts to convey a clear, organized message, vivid images with precise word choice, and correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling designed to effectively share my ideas with you, my readers!
 * **a brief description of what you think you did well in the writing.**
 * **the word** **praise, raise, or elevate** **depending on what feedback you want from your audienc**

Jill R Essay

Jill R Bio poem This is one of my favorite writing pieces. I enjoy my word choice and expression that was used in this.Please give me feedback so I can make my writing better. Enjoy!!!!

Jill R Where I am From Please take the time to read this piece. I like the vocabulary that I used give me suggestions please thanks.

Jill R perception inspired by Wiliam Carlos William

Jill R Snapshot Moment Please take the time to read this. I hope you notice my vocabulary

Jill R snapshot moment 2

Jill R prologue This is my rough draft it is not done yet.

Jill R Poem This is a few words on what i think of snow